Tuesday, September 6, 2011

My Dangerous Experience

        When I was younger.I liked to go swimming because we were near at the sea.One day, my cousin and I decided to swim while we were walking we  were very happy were excited.When we were swimming we were enjoying the water because it so warm to feel.we didn't notice that the wave is becoming bigger and because we our very far the way to go up.My cousin and I was panic already and we felt that we are drowning and because there are many guy who were swimming even the wave was heavy they help us brought in he center.First we were nervous because they brought us in the center where the waves were more  heavy  and later on they explain us why they brought us in the center  and we understand the reason.After that we went home crying,shy,nervous,and also thank full that  we survive we also learn were lesson for that experience.After what happen to use we decided to learn how to swim.That is our dangerous experience.

19 comments:

  1. I use this for my homework haha! tnx ;)

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  3. Nice but short but still good keep going

    Thanks

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  4. Write the essay of this subject of 300 words

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  5. Nice story ..... Used as my homework

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  6. Good and amazing but also some little mistaked in it

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  7. Wow that's great I also wrote my essay with your story

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